Paul and Jennifer still try to have sex, and the mood killers aren't directly related to Paul's suffering. Ringo rejects the idea violently - and Jennifer is hurt.) The pregnancy nearly kills Paul several times over, and he is manhandled several times during it even though it's explicitly said it'll make him worse - sometimes by an angry Jennifer, who should know better. (When Ringo finally learns about the pregnancy and asks who's messed up, Jennifer proposes they have sex to find out. (That he forgets that death by sleeping pills would be bad for the baby may or may not be justified.) Jennifer (the character) is at least part Tsundere Sue and is quite callous about people other than herself and Paul - and she isn't exactly easy on him. It's bad enough (nigh-involuntary screams, tears, passing out cold) that he makes one impulsive suicide attempt. It is also a Hurt Comfort Fic, only with almost no comfort for Paul, who is the one doing most of the hurting.

Comments: This Fan Fic has been sought out by people who aren't fans of The Beatles for its depiction of how not to do mpreg it is known as the infamous Paul McCartney Mary Sue mpreg fic.Much pain, UST, and poor communication ensues. Paul is pro-life enough that he decides to go through with it anyway, to Jennifer's astonishment. A week later (with few details, but we know Paul has not been improving), the doctor determines, hardly believing it himself, that Paul is pregnant because Jennifer's egg somehow got into him - and no, we do not know how this was determined what is more, it will be a life-endangering pregnancy because the doctor does not know where the egg implanted, just that it's in the stomach cavity, likely on a vital organ. Synopsis: After a wild bout of sex that somehow feels unusual to our narrator Jennifer (with Paul pulling out just before climax as an attempt at birth control), Paul becomes seriously ill.Pairings: Paul/Jennifer (an Author Avatar), implied past Ringo/Jennifer.(mpreg, explicit sex, Hurt Comfort Fic, suicide attempt) Comments: Oh dear God, the script format! The lack of description and the general strangeness are too much for anyone with brain cells.The fic ends with Dib's death and ZIM and Maz's sending their annoying offspring to the Tallest. With that out of the way, ZIM and MAZ proceed to kiss 56,935,748,302 times and then are married. Maz is unimpressed and sends Nny to take care of her. Out of nowhere, ZIM lets it slip that he's in love with Tak. She confesses to ZIM and then uses a magical device to turn them both older - never mind that ZIM is canonically already an adult. All the boys fall in love with her, including Dib, whom she uses to get to ZIM. The Tallest both adore her, but the thought of being in a threesome squicks her out, and so she goes after ZIM - um, she leaves for Earth to be with her one true love. Synopsis: Enter Maz, who is 'exceedingly tall and very beautiful for a invader girl'.Pairings: MarySue/Zim, Tallest Sues/Tallest, and a lot of Starboarding.Fandom: Invader Zim with a cameo from Johnny The Homicidal Maniac.Invader MAZ (Mary Sue, horrible grammar, script format, character death) (thankfully) Safe for work.'Organization XIII in World War Two' is a decent idea for a Dark Fic but a combination of Beige Prose, historical inaccuracy, Canon Defilement, and unsuitable fluffiness dooms this fic before it leaves the ground.This is honestly one of the worst things I've ever read, and that's not even including the sub-par writing, horrible grammar and hideous mischaracterization. Congratulations, you've just pissed on the memory of the millions who died during that horrifying war. I also don't think there's a word for the kind of person who is stupid enough to think that the genocide of millions is a good background for a glorified highschool romance. > 'You know, I don't think there is a word in the english language to convey just how horribly offensive and sickening this writing is.

Instead, they're running concentration camps between classes. They do things that, in Real Life, would have put them in a concentration camp.

Synopsis: Organization XIII are (human?) Nazis, some more willingly than others.

Although the fic has been taken down, a MST of it is available here.

If I Was Your Nazi (slash, Holocaust AU).

Highschool of the dead tv tropes